Some of my ideas that I had in mind for my memoir is to have lots of dialogue throughout my paper. I believe that this is really important to have so that the reader can feel like there exactly there with me. I also wanted to have lots of imagery in my paper, I want the reader to see what I am saying in my writing. I want to start off my paper from the beginning of my story and explain moment by moment what happened. Here is a little piece on what I have so far...
I remember waking up one morning for school not feeling to well. It was raining and cold outside. I usually dreaded to miss school because I hated to be behind and having to make-up work .But I just couldn't push myself to get up, when I finally had the strength to get out of bed I walked down the hallway to tell my ma that I didn't feel well . She told me to lay back down and just take the day off; So I did. An hour into my sleep my phone rung and woke me up, it was an text message from my friend in class. "Brittney where are you! we need you to anchor today remember!" I had total forgot that I signed up for anchoring that week.....
This sounds like a really enticing narrative. I was a little upset that that's all you put on here because I am already interested in it!
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