Self-Reflection

My Paper at first did not follow the MLA format until I went back to the Bridging the difference book and refreshed my memory on the steps for the header. I believe my title does grab the readers attention when someone reads my title the first thought should be "What wreck?" or "What happened to her?". When I first did my introduction to me it didn't seem like it would grab anyone's attention or make the reader keep reading; So I put a short clip of the climax in the beginning then rewind back to that morning. I think this way was better because the climax was exciting and it makes the reader wanting to read more. I learned many things from writing this paper. One of those things is using imagery.I believe using imagery can make the reader see what you saw and make them seem like they was right there  beside you.