1. What were your biggest challenges in researching and writing your Proposal?
My biggest challenge in researching my proposal was having to find different stories on community gardens that was already created. There was many website that had ways you can find a community garden close by, but there wasn't any stories about someone who created a community garden and how they was or wasn't successful. The biggest challenge on writing my proposal was the conclusion paragraph. I have trouble with pulling all my ideas together and giving the reader with something new to think about.
2. What do you feel is the best element of your final proposal?
The best element on my final proposal was the structure of my paper. I thought that having titles for my paragraphs makes it easier for the reader to know what my paragraph consist of. The structure of my paper follows an order, It states the problem, solution, then gives examples on how the solution is a great idea.
3. What do you feel is the weakest element of your final proposal?
My choice of vocabulary was not as strong in paper, I felt like I could of changed a few words around to make it sound more formal. I also could of took words out that was not needed.
4. What could you have done differently to improve your overall performance with both the Literature Review and the Proposal?
One of the things that I could of done differently to improve my overall performance with my proposal is that I could of added more on the topic Farmer's Market. I believe that I could of did more research and found some examples on how farmers market is made-up. I also could of improved adding more transitions in my paper.
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