Monday, January 28, 2013

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Together We Can
            “So I’m putting forward a specific set of proposals based on the work of Joe’s task force. And in the days ahead I intend to use whatever weight this office holds to make them a reality;” Stated President Obama during his speech in Washington D.C on January 16, 2013. President Obama insisted that we issue a gun control problem to reduce the violence in America. He emphasizes throughout his speech that “We” as in every citizen in the United States, needs to come together and speak up on the violence so that change can come.
            Millions of people in the United States sat and watched Obama’s speech on their televisions, smart phones, or even listened to it on the radio. Watching some speech’s can be a bit dull and can tend to have people, including myself, dosing off while watching it. President Obama speech on Gun Control however, had me glued to the TV screen and also on board with his proposal on the gun control. Through Repetition, his use of historical references, and the structure of his speech, President Obama persuades his audience to be on board with his proposal on issuing Gun Control.
            Throughout his speech President Obama repetitively used the word “violence”. “To help prevent mass shootings, to reduce the broader epidemic of gun violence in this country.” Or “if there’s even one thing we can do to reduce this violence, if there’s even one life that can be saved, then we’ve got an obligation to try.” President Obama repetitively used the word “violence” to emphasize to Americans that gun shootings are increasing in the United States and we have to do something to stop it. The word violence itself is a powerful word; it opens up peoples ears when they hear it and makes them listen to what is being said about it. By using this word president Obama can persuade Americans that guns are very violent and dangerous and needs to be kept out the hands of dangerous people.
            President Obama repetitively used the word Violence was a great way to grab the attention to all Americans.  But when he stated the historically references on Ronald Reagan it gave him creditability on how great the gun control proposal will be. “And, by the way, so did Ronald Reagan, one of the staunchest defenders of the Second Amendment, who wrote to Congress in 1994, urging them — this is Ronald Reagan speaking — urging them to listen to the American public and to the law enforcement community and support a ban on the further manufacture of military-style assault weapons.” President Obama used this quote from Ronald Reagan to show the people that even a great idol of the United States once said that we should have a ban on assault weapons. President Obama also speaks on the second amendment, “Like most Americans, I believe the Second Amendment guarantees an individual right to bear arms.” President Obama speaks on this so that he can still gain the trust of the people who uses guns for hunting or sports. President Obama doesn’t want the gun control issue to be a bad thing he wants it to be a good one for all Americans.
            The way President Obama structured his speech not only kept everyone who was watching glued to their television but it touched Americans hearts when he speaks on the killings of young children and adults. “And obviously, none have affected us more than the families of those gorgeous children and their teachers and guardians who were lost.” Or “This is our first task as a society, keeping our children safe. This is how we will be judged. And their voices should compel us to change.” President Obama structured his speech with quotes about the children and adults who were murdered so that he can create a mood of sadness and anger that the use of guns is used to take away loved ones. By doing this it caused Americans to stop and think to themselves “we do need a control on purchasing guns”. President Obama also used letters from young children about how we should do something about the killings in the U.S. “Hinna (ph) wrote, “I feel terrible for the parents who lost their children. I love my country, and I want everybody to be happy, and safe.” And another letter from a young child “And then Grant, go ahead and wave Grant, Grant said, “I think there should be some changes. We should learn from what happened at Sandy Hook. I feel really bad.” Using the letters from children also creates a mood of sadness it shows to Americans that young kids also agrees on having change and the need for control on assault weapons.
            Finally, President Obama states in his speech what congress needs to do to help with the change in stopping the violence in the U.S. “To make a real and lasting difference, Congress, too, must act, and Congress must act soon. And I’m calling on Congress to pass some very specific proposals right away.” Obama then states three things that congress needs to do to help make a change in the use of guns. After each statement Obama tells us some background information on why he states theses three things. President Obama does this because he wants all Americans to know that he is not the only one who can enforce the control on guns. He wants the citizens of America to know that we all need to work together to enforce these laws. In closing his speech president Obama stated “we must act now, for Grace, for the 25 other innocent children and devoted educators who had so much left to give; for the men and women in big cities and small towns who fall victims to senseless violence each and every day; for all the Americans who are counting on us to keep them safe from harm.” By the end of this statement Americans are persuade to help speak out on the gun violence in the U.S.

Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Basic Questions for Rhetorical Analysis

  • Who is the author/speaker?
-Obama uses ethos when he quotes about Ronald Reagan:
"And, by the way, so did Ronald Reagan, one of the staunchest defenders of the Second Amendment, who wrote to Congress in 1994, urging them — this is Ronald Reagan speaking — urging them to listen to the American public and to the law enforcement community and support a ban on the further manufacture of military-style assault weapons."

  • What is his/her intention?
- His intention is to have America on board with him issuing Gun Control.
-Stop violence

 

  • Who make up the audience?
-The target audience is America, and the secondary audience is Congress.
"To make a real and lasting difference, Congress, too, must act, and Congress must act soon. And I’m calling on Congress to pass some very specific proposals right away."
-Obama uses PATHOS when he talks to the audience about the small beautiful children that died at the Sandy Hook shooting and the brave teachers who also died. The audience feels sad and also angry that innocent people died because of the use of gun violence.



  • What is the form/structure/medium in which it is conveyed?
-Obama states the problem in his speech and then tells why it is a problem and how we need to fix it. By doing this the audience can easily follow along with him and be persuade into being on board for issuing the Gun Control proposal



  • Which persuasive and rhetorical devices are used to accomplish the purpose?
-Obama uses many rhetorical devices throughout his speech.
"we are endowed by our Creator with certain unalienable rights that no man or government can take away from us. " He uses this from the Declaration of Independence to show ETHOS. It moves the audience because it is powerful and famous words.
-At first Obama uses a sad or sympathetic tone in his speech when he reads the letters from the children about stopping gun violence and when he talks about the Innocent people who died because of it. Then later on in his speech Obama tone is very authoritative when he talks about how congress needs to help too and what we as Americans need to do together.
-Obama also brightens up the mood in his speech when he reads a little girl letter to him.
"You know, in the letter that Julia wrote me, she said “I know that laws have to be passed by Congress, but I beg you to try very hard.” The audience gets a little laugh and then the president agrees with her and makes his point that Congress needs to help with the gun control.

Friday, January 18, 2013

Summary of Speech


The text that I’m summarizing is the Obama speech on gun control. The title of the article is Transcript President Obama, Joe Biden speech on gun control the author of the article is Brandon jones. A short overview of Obama’s speech is that he is talking about the new proposal on gun control. Obama starts of talking about the Sandy Hook devastation and how we lost 20 children and 6 adults that day. He uses pathos when he talks about the innocent people who died and even told us how 900 more people died in the last month because of gun use. He talks about how he wants to make getting guns more difficult, and not as easy as it is right now. He also speaks on getting better security for schools and better emergency preparedness plans. He also states what congress needs to do to make a difference.